Monday, November 14 - Thursday, November 17

Thursday
Hink Pink: test expert
1. Reading time for literary fiction book.
2. Block F - we need to mark yesterday's quiz.
    Block H - make sure you have attached the rubric to your ad deconstruction
3. Make sure you have identified the evidence of quality on your ad deconstruction.
4. Peer editors - complete the orange check list for the deconstructions
5. I am going to see as many people as I can during class to check over your ad deconstruction. If you want feedback, and I don't get to you today, come in to see me tomorrow morning. 
6. Visual literacy - complete final self-reflection.
7. Semi-colon usage.
We will be in Room 100 for most of the class. Make sure you check your grades for term 1 to see if anything is missing.
FYI - Term 1 non-fiction reading - last day to hand in is tomorrow.


Wednesday
Hink Pink: shovel-up the droppings
1. Reading time for literary fiction book.
2. Edit QUIZ! We will mark in class so put your student # on it.
3. Block H - we need to mark last week's quiz.
4. Identify evidence of quality in your ad deconstruction.
5. Peer editing of ad deconstructions.



Tuesday
Hink Pink: bogus earth movement
1. Reading time for literary fiction book.
2. Blue edit sheet - go over it and look at how to identify and correct the errors. Quiz tomorrow on the questions we identify in class.
3. Block H - we need to mark last week's quiz.
4. Identify evidence of quality in your ad deconstruction.
5. Proofreading your Ad deconstructions for run-on sentences. Have 3 students initial that they have checked your paper.
6. Peer editing of ad deconstructions.
Rei R. Noguchi, in his book Grammar and the Teaching of Writing, recommends two methods for testing your sentences. Try these two tests:
  1. Turn your sentences into yes/no questions.
  2. Turn your sentences into tag questions (sentences that end with a questioning phrase at the very end—look at our examples below).
These are two things that nearly everyone can do easily if the sentence is not a run-on, but they become next to impossible if it is.
Look at the following sentence:
    My favorite Mediterranean spread is hummus.
If you turn it into a question that someone could answer with a yes or no, it looks like this:
    Is my favorite Mediterranean spread hummus?
If you turn it into a tag question, it looks like this:
    My favorite Mediterranean spread is hummus, isn’t it?
The first sentence is complete and not a run-on, because our test worked.
Now, look again at the original run-on sentence:
    My favorite Mediterranean spread is hummus it is very garlicky.
The yes/no question can only be made with each separate thought, not the sentence as a whole:
    Is my favorite Mediterranean spread hummus? Is it very garlicky?
But not:
    Is my favorite Mediterranean spread hummus is it very garlicky?
The tag question can also only be made with each separate thought, rather than the whole:
    My favorite Mediterranean spread is hummus, isn’t it? It’s very garlicky, isn’t it?
But never:
    My favorite Mediterranean spread is hummus it is very garlicky, isn’t it?
Unlike the complete sentence, the run-on sentence doesn’t pass these tests. When you try to turn the run-on sentence into a single question, you immediately see that the sentence has more than one complete concept. Make sure you try both tests with each of your problem sentences, because you may trick yourself by just putting a tag on the last part and not noticing that it doesn’t work on the first. Some people might not notice that “My favorite Mediterranean spread is hummus it is very garlicky isn’t it?” is wrong, but most people will spot the yes/no question problem right away.



Monday
Hink Pink: ship saying
1. Reading time for literary fiction term 2 book. Record title of your book on class list that will be circulated. Please tell me during this time if you did not write last week's visual literacy quiz.
2. Mark last week's quiz.
3. Complete the blue sheet - editing errors. Quiz on these types of errors on Wednesday.
4. Complete evidence of learning related to visual literacy unit. What are your rights and responsibilities as a digital citizen?
http://vancouversun.com/news/local-news/why-postmedia-chose-not-to-share-abbotsford-stabbing-video
5. Work on ad deconstruct? Get feedback from me at this time.
6. Next unit? Pod Casts or Poetry & Short Stories or Documentary Films?

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